Boot Camp
Sometimes we can say a lot with just a few words. Sometimes things aren't what they seem. And what is voice? All I can say is this. Voice isn't just choice of words. It's a writer's way of showing how he or she sees the world.
For millions of juveniles, Basic Training begins in summer. One morning in June, a group convened for their briefing. The drill sergeant...
Sergeant Grackle will make her appearance somewhere, some time in the future.
Boot Camp
By Jess Patrick
For millions of juveniles, Basic Training begins in summer. One morning in June, a group convened for their briefing. The drill sergeant...
Sergeant Grackle will make her appearance somewhere, some time in the future.
Previously published at BeWrite.net
posted by Jpatrick at 18:05
6 Comments:
I remember this one. :-D
Cute. Try Story Station for this.
Marva
Hi Jess!
Just nipping in to say although I may not leave comments, I do come here to read on my breaks from writing!
Enjoyable read!
:o)
Hi Jess
Just popped by. Really like the story. Is it part of something longer? It's especially interesting for me as a character in one of my novels is a soldier. Like your blog.
Nah. Sergeant Grackle has done her duty in this story. It's so fun to watch it happen every June on the lawn, though.
Came here through Faith's blog.
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